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October 5, 2013
By micshea99 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
micshea99 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
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A heavy stone falls
Through my body.
Ripping my insides away
in a slow, painful manner.

Pulling me down until I'm a puddle,
A liquid state of myself,
floating endlessly
In a world of “I-Should-Be's”



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on Oct. 12 2013 at 1:33 pm
micshea99 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
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Aww thank you!

on Oct. 12 2013 at 1:32 pm
micshea99 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
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Thank you so much!

Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 12 2013 at 12:20 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

Perfect wording to capture a feeling of tension that affects us all some day or another. The last line adds beauty to it all. Just wonderful. Congrats on the Editors' Choice.

on Oct. 12 2013 at 12:45 am
SpidersAcrossStars PLATINUM, Hayward, California
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Favorite Quote:
For you, a thousand times over.

Wow this is so raw. You used the perfect words. That was great....voted