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No One Knows

October 8, 2013
By BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
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Love is an Emotion of strong Affection and Personal Attachment.....


I'm Hurting, Hurting so bad.
I cry a lot, I cover up with a smile.
Inside I'm hurting, I'm just laughing.
I'm insecure, I act all tough.
So many friends, and am still lonely.
But No One Knows.

He said he loved me,
I said let's be friends,
That's not how I feel,
Am just really scared.
But He Doesn't Know.

You see me sad,
I say am fine,
And then I smile.
But when you leave,
I start to cry.
But You Don't Know.


The tears never end.
The depression never leaves.
The pain never goes away.
The heartache remains.
But No One Knows.
No One Will Ever Know.



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BlurAngel GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2014 at 10:08 pm
BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
16 articles 16 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is an Emotion of strong Affection and Personal Attachment.....

Thank you very much, it was exactly how i felt then. i will see what i can do to improve the second stanza { :D 

on Oct. 21 2013 at 5:09 pm
FinnWinterfall GOLD, Rochester, Massachusetts
10 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There, there."

Great Job with this poem.  The second stanza is a little confusing, and may need some more editing to flow better, but other than that I really liked it.  I get what you're saying too, because I feel this way sometimes.  Keep on pouring your emotion into your writing, because that's where it shines best :)