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Alone

October 10, 2013
By Dontez Garrard BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
Dontez Garrard BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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Alone alone nobody but nobody can make it out here alone.
All I remember is my pain.
Of me being all alone with nobody in sight for me to call on.
All alone in tears by my self.
All alone with no type of help.
All alone thinking bout our memories.
Alone alone thinking bout the good days.
Dang I miss how it used to be.
Only time I don’t feel alone is in my dreams.
Alone because somebody took my momma life away from me.
Alone alone but lucky I got a great family
All alone I just want to be happy that’s all I want to be
All alone but I still have to make my mom proud.
But sometimes I don’t feel alone
Because I KNOW my mom is looking down from heaven at me right now.
So I just wipe my tears and just smile.


The author's comments:
I made this poem because it expresses all my feelings. It shows all my poetic skills because I really love to rhyme. I made a lot of changes at first I only had 8 lines in this poem. I had to shorten some things and make some sentences over. I had to put more details in my words. In my story I really didn’t have to think much because that’s just how I feel on a daily bases.

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