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October 23, 2013
By Brisa PLATINUM, Wasilla, Alaska
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Brisa PLATINUM, Wasilla, Alaska
20 articles 7 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Si dan a t&uacute; papel alineado, escribas el otro camino.&quot;<br /> &quot;If they give you lined paper, write the other way&quot;<br /> -Juan Ramon Jiminez

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water weighs nothing.
it is
liquid glass between my
outstretched hands
as I drift to the bottom

and settle like sand.
don't tell me to come back up

for I can only speak in
bubble curtains
thick and sparkling clear.
instead join me

here at the bottom

of the busy world
where the blue is deep and soft
and silent.

© Sadra L., Buckeye, AZ

The author's comments:
I'd like for different readers to get different meanings from this, because my favorite part of poetry is its ambiguity; for this reason, I won't assign a translation to it, but I will say that this came from a desire to connect to and relate with other people on an emotional level.
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Brisa PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 6 2013 at 6:34 pm
Brisa PLATINUM, Wasilla, Alaska
20 articles 7 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Si dan a t&uacute; papel alineado, escribas el otro camino.&quot;<br /> &quot;If they give you lined paper, write the other way&quot;<br /> -Juan Ramon Jiminez

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Thanks guys :)
CallMeSunshine GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2013 at 4:07 pm
CallMeSunshine GOLD, Lehi, Utah
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&quot;Creativity takes courage.&quot;

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It's utterly peaceful. The feeling you would get from standing alone in the middle of a forest; that feeling of oneness. You describe it well. It's lovely :) Good work
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Oct. 28 2013 at 1:14 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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The imagery in this is so unique and beautiful—more about how the water feels than how it looks, which I think is really original of you. The peaceful tone in this (I'm not sure if that's what you intended) really drew me to it. Really good poem (: