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Engaged

December 6, 2013
By Roiel SILVER, YouMayneverknow, Oklahoma
Roiel SILVER, YouMayneverknow, Oklahoma
9 articles 13 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe that you should never feel compelled to explain yourself if you know your telling the truth.


Today we sit,sit and talk,today we laugh as the moon comes up,he reaches for a box,a box for me, as i open it up i fill with glee,two simple words flow out,out of my mouth,I do, then they walk off as happy as two


The author's comments:
this peice was inspired to me by my uncle tommys wedding

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on Mar. 17 2014 at 8:13 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Wow! I really enjoyed this poem! I loved the happy tone and the sweet voice; as well as the simplicity! I love it! 

on Jan. 6 2014 at 3:24 pm
Fortunes-Hidden-From-A-Jade-Dragon, Houston, Texas
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This poem was short and extremely sweet. It had a certain charm to it that only rhyming poems have, especialy the setting i love the way you added the moon in there becuase moons are super romantic i just totaly set the scene ^.^ keep up th awesome work!

on Jan. 2 2014 at 9:31 pm
theatregirl PLATINUM, Lathrup Village, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;To thine own self be true,&quot; -from Hamlet, a play by Shakespeare.<br /> &quot;I have sworn on the altar of god eternal hostility against all forms of tyranny over the mind of man.&quot; - Thomas Jefferson

love the poem, I like how the rhyme in it. Its really nice happy poem