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Tuesday Afternoons

February 5, 2014
By sullivano17 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
sullivano17 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You can't make up anything anymore. The world itself is a satire. All you're doing is recording it. - Art Buchwald


“Damn”

I said as I trudged by your hidden presence, in what felt like the coldest and darkest hallway

On a Tuesday afternoon

You looked down at your toes, and pretended I was a speck of dust

And you held your wall up so high, not even Rapunzel’s hair would reach

You are like the moon, always hidden away

Pretending that you swim in fields of pastel flowers and precious butterflies

But in reality, your mind is like hell

And you may ask how I know what hell is like

But maybe I’m already there

Without you by my side



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on Jun. 13 2014 at 4:53 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

Oh my gosh. I cannot express to you how much I like this. The beginning is powerful and captured my attention right away, and then the rest of it was well thought out and on point all the way through. I liked where you made reference to Repunzel, very clever. Basically the whole thing is just awesome, pleasure to read :)

on Feb. 10 2014 at 12:26 pm
sullivano17 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
23 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can&#039;t make up anything anymore. The world itself is a satire. All you&#039;re doing is recording it. - Art Buchwald

thank you!! glad you like it 

x_rbdf GOLD said...
on Feb. 10 2014 at 8:24 am
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

Brillant !!! I mean It Speaks To Me