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what are you doing to me?

February 21, 2014
By mylittle_bird DIAMOND, Pilot Point, Texas
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mylittle_bird DIAMOND, Pilot Point, Texas
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"I loved all the boys with soft sad eyes and lost souls." -Grace Coddington

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I can’t even write about you
because the moment
you enter my mind my
heart starts to quiver and my lips
stop beating; maybe it’s the other way around.
My hearing is fuzzy, eyes unfocused,
fingers tapping nervously.

You are not pretty words written in my
memories; You are barbed wire
and ice and stone and I cannot stop
loving You.

© Jack B., Central City, KY

The author's comments:
It's like he's untouchable. Enough to tease my heart but too far out of my grasp.
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