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Yes! It was you.

March 15, 2014
By pikachulover SILVER, Kanpur, Other
pikachulover SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Remember, today is the tomorrow of yesterday you worried about.


When I opened my eyes for the first time,
It was you, whom I saw.
When I cried for the first time,
It was you, who asked the reason for,
When I toddled for the first time,
It was you who smiled.
When I hurt myself for the first time,
It was you who medicated it.
When I cried, you cried with me.
When I laughed, you laughed with me
In my every success, it was your success.
In my every failure, it was your failure.
Yes mom, yes!
It was you whom I first saw.
Yes mom, it was you, who asked the reason for my cry,
Yes mom, yes,
It was you smiling after seeing me toddling.
Yes, mom it was you who cried for my wound.
Yes mom. Yes!
It is you, who has always been in my success,
In my happiness and in my sadness,
And, yes I believe,
That it is me who’s been so lucky,
To have a mom like you......



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on May. 17 2015 at 11:16 pm
pikachulover SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Remember, today is the tomorrow of yesterday you worried about.

Thanks a lot!

on May. 15 2015 at 9:49 am
LotusChild PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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"Let them hate, so long as they fear me" ~Colligula

This is truly a moving piece, although I feel that the wording could be better, the "yes moms" lifted me with each time I read through them. As if you couldn't thank her enough, and as well all should be like that. I think the rhythm was a bit off, though that's obviously not the point. You made a powerful impression with what you wrote, and I like it.