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March 26, 2014
By Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
65 articles 0 photos 173 comments

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The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened. <br /> - Thomas Jefferson

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unravel me
my hopes
and dreams
my insecurities
what brings me clarity
what causes my
insanity.

© Mercedes R., Queens, NY

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Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 18 2014 at 6:01 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
65 articles 0 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened. <br /> - Thomas Jefferson

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thankyou!  
elycavill SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2014 at 3:52 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
5 articles 0 photos 186 comments

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Leave nothing but footprints,<br /> Take nothing but pictures,<br /> Kill nothing but time.

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I am not sure if my comment is going to be published because I used word d*mn, so again, so d*amn good poem! loved it and keep up :)
elycavill SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2014 at 3:51 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
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Leave nothing but footprints,<br /> Take nothing but pictures,<br /> Kill nothing but time.

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Short and full of deep thinking, so (damn') good. I really love this poem, and the rhyme in the end is like sugar in the end! keep up writing for sure!
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 12 2014 at 11:08 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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If poeple realy do care about you, then they're willing to unravel you and be with you. Short as it may be, it's powerful! ^_^ thank you, for sharing this!