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Flying or Falling?

May 28, 2014
By solveigg15 BRONZE, Missoula, Montana
solveigg15 BRONZE, Missoula, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
Your heart is just the beat box to the song of your life.


Step by step I climb the pole,
higher and higher I reach.
I don’t look down
I’m too busy looking up.

My fingers swim
into the indents of the rocks.
I’m almost there.
I feel the wind on my back.

I reach for the pale board above,
pulling myself to the top.
I’m standing looking at the mountain,
clutching a thick red rope.

The next person climbs.
The pole shakes under my feet.
Below are hundreds of wood chips
swirling on little hills.

The third person is up now,
I hold the second to keep her from falling.
We all step back
to hold each other’s palms.

I slip.
The second girl falls with me.
Our grip lightens as we separate.
The third boy jumps.

I feel myself moving through the air.
But I am caught.
I open my eyes.
Slowly the ropes I am tied to lower me.

I look up to the pole,
The forty-foot pole
that I just flew off.

-Solveig Gallego



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on Jun. 3 2014 at 2:28 pm
StayyPerfectt09 BRONZE, Hartstown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You know my name, not my story. You've heard what I've done, not what I've been through."

This was a really great poem. I hope more people see it. I'm glad I did.(:

on May. 29 2014 at 7:30 pm
cayaTW PLATINUM, Yuma, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Those who forget history will often repeat it

what i really liked about this poem was that it had a rythm to it and it made me feel as if i was there experiencing it.