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Insomnia MAG

June 8, 2014
By StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
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StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
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"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

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I hope I never forget
What it felt like to be up all night
When I wasn't still enough for sleep
The nausea of insomnia
The beauty of a silent world
The way I smiled in Boston
The first time I heard city noise
Excited that this animal of people
This creature with one thousand hearts
Also could not slow itself to sleep

I am grateful for the hours
Spent staring at the stars taped to my ceiling
Absolutely still
The hot and humid silence of my mind
Keeping me awake
My ticking dead, my watch still wound
My heart the angry worker
Who was not paid for overtime

The bottle of my new prescription
Says it may cause restlessness
But I've learned it merely helps to bring it back
The tickticktick of shaking legs
One thousand manufactured heartbeats
When I am asked about my sleep
I do not have to lie
The noise I love will still be there at dawn

© Allison H., Vancouver, WA

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Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Jun. 21 2015 at 12:55 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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You still have your way with words :) Congrats on still being awesome. Love this poem.
TakeAGuessKatara SILVER said...
on Aug. 26 2014 at 11:30 pm
TakeAGuessKatara SILVER, Beltsville, Maryland
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I completly agree with this :)  I loved the metaphors and emotion in this poem. 
Meg887 said...
on Jun. 12 2014 at 10:35 pm
Meg887, Weaverville, North Carolina
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This is a wonderful poem! It kind of reminds me of Hazel in Fault in Our Stars!
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jun. 12 2014 at 12:25 pm
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I love the imagery and comparisoin you made! Lovely piece! :)
mereCat PLATINUM said...
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Beyond amazing... this deserves the magazine <3
Z.V.Oksana PLATINUM said...
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Beautifully written!