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June 13, 2014
By JulieC. BRONZE, Wolfeboro, New Hampshire
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JulieC. BRONZE, Wolfeboro, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Never give up, never give in, and when the upper hand is ours, may we have the ability to handle the win with the dignity that we absorbed the loss.<br /> ~Doug Williams

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I feel abandoned
I feel lost and out in space

I wonder where I am, if I'll ever be truly loved
I want you to love me,for you to boast.
I wish you were here.

I feel abandoned,
I feel lost

Since you left me here all alone I haven't let anyone else in.
I want you to love me Mama!
I want you to care for me the way I care for you.

I am abandoned,
I am lost.
You said you wanted the best for me, but you didn't!
You just wanted the extra money Daddy was giving as child support.
Well guess what?1? News Flash
You never supported me.
You tore me down. Haha.

I was abandoned,
I was lost.

But now I've found them, my family,
The ones who I love and love me back.
Just like you said you did, and you pretended to.

She took your place Mama.
How does that feel??

I am Claimed!
I am Found!

© Krystal B., Bloomingdale , IL

The author's comments:
This is about a hardship I have over come. I thank my step mom for this.
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wilds PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 10 2015 at 8:38 am
wilds PLATINUM, Newfane, New York
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this is an excellent poem. great job. i have murder inn part 2 TeenInk.com/fiction/thriller_mystery/article/786193/Murder-Inn-part-2/
absband SILVER said...
on Apr. 3 2015 at 12:39 pm
absband SILVER, Newfane, New York
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This is an excellent piece. Keep writing!
JulieC. BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2015 at 11:08 am
JulieC. BRONZE, Wolfeboro, New Hampshire
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Thank you! I really appreciate it
JulieC. BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2015 at 11:07 am
JulieC. BRONZE, Wolfeboro, New Hampshire
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Never give up, never give in, and when the upper hand is ours, may we have the ability to handle the win with the dignity that we absorbed the loss.<br /> ~Doug Williams

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Thank you so much
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 23 2014 at 9:55 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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This is really great! Thank you, for sharing this!
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 23 2014 at 9:50 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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I love this! Keep on writing! Thank you, for sharing this!
Miss_Orange SILVER said...
on Jun. 23 2014 at 10:34 am
Miss_Orange SILVER, Makati, Other
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Yay Julie! Great peice, I can relat to this, My "Dad" left before my sister and I were born. I have a step-dad now and he's the best father in the world. I love this, thank you for sharing this julie, it means a lot. kepp going! :D