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a tree

June 16, 2014
By bella-nielsen GOLD, Marshall, Minnesota
bella-nielsen GOLD, Marshall, Minnesota
13 articles 27 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"autism isn't contagious, but a smile is and that's what im afraid of."-grumpy cat


a tree
all alone
surrounded by prairie
a field of dry grass
the heat of sun great
turning the sandy soil into glass
a fire starts
the tree cannot flee
its roots bound into earth
fire cackles at the trees fear
then as mother nature favors
it began to rain
rained to heavily
the fire cackles no more
a tree
all alone
surrounded by prairie
a field of green grass



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on Jun. 24 2014 at 4:21 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

I like the sudden change into the better. It made it sound unique and outstanding. Nice work again Bella!

on Jun. 24 2014 at 3:49 pm
FreeAtLast GOLD, Limerick, Maine
16 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
#RebelStatus

You stepped out of the box for this one, thats how it get its origiality. It shows a lot in a person. I really like this. 

on Jun. 24 2014 at 11:19 am
Miss_Orange SILVER, Makati, Other
6 articles 0 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;m OK, I&#039;m Fine and I&#039;m alright are the greatest lies people tell each other everyday.&quot; By Me.

I like this bella, nice sybolism! 

on Jun. 24 2014 at 11:15 am
HayatC. PLATINUM, Louisville, Kentucky
25 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do not pray for an easy life, pray for the strength to endure a difficult one.&quot;

From an analytical point of view, you're poem personifies a sudden change of fate, a fortunate one. Makes me feel very hopeful and I absolutely loved it! 5/5

on Jun. 23 2014 at 6:52 pm
BikerPrincess GOLD, Jerico Springs, Missouri
12 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
This sweet, dark angel with all her secrets and fears. I want to save her.

I think it's good. I love the imagery