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August 22, 2014
By GonzaloTovilla BRONZE, Richardson, Texas
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&quot;In writing, you must kill all your darlings?&quot;<br /> -William Faulkner

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I lost myself in the space between yesterday and tomorrow
and its all because you said I love you but
you don’t seem like you do
when you stare down cold and ignorant every time I say I
care for you
and I just force a smile and watch the rain fall on dead plants
You know when things don’t match
forlorn hearts always try to find a reason why

© Hannah S., Avondale, AZ

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EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 17 2014 at 11:34 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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Oh, wow. This is absolutely amazing and beautiful, yet sad. I can rather connect. Thank you for sharing this! You have such a talent and greatness in you, I hope you know that. Thank you for sharing this.
Crystallite BRONZE said...
on Sep. 17 2014 at 12:43 am
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
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like woah dude is so poetic! awesome poem! where has this poetic dude been hiding?  :-)
Love2Read72 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 16 2014 at 11:48 pm
Love2Read72 PLATINUM, Kentfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life isn&rsquo;t about how to survive the storm, it&rsquo;s about learning to dance in the rain.&rdquo; &mdash; Taylor Swift

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Love it. My favorite line is "I lost myself in the space/between yesterday and/tomorrow"
Kaydie PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 11 2014 at 11:18 pm
Kaydie PLATINUM, Uyo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;There are all these ideas about what is perfect and what is beautifu land what is smart,but the most appealing thing is,that which is me is nobody else&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Jennifer Lopez

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Huh Mikky...William Shakespeare wud hav luvd him  
Mikky_Ekko13 SILVER said...
on Sep. 11 2014 at 9:43 pm
Mikky_Ekko13 SILVER, Osseo, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
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Love it, Romeo :D