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the Ass who showed the oppisite of love

September 12, 2014
By Raybaby SILVER, Sulphur Ok, Oklahoma
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Raybaby SILVER, Sulphur Ok, Oklahoma
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&#039;&#039;The world isn&#039;t split between good people and death eaters. We&#039;ve all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That&#039;s who we really are.&quot;<br /> ~Sirius Black

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i thought he was a dream

i thought he was my everything

but he flipped it on me

i wont smoke weed

i wont have a drink

and i won't lay without a wedding ring

he left me crying

he never really cared

he broke me with a smile

and claimed there to be no such thing as forever

my guard was never up with him

i believed what he had to say

he lied often

and went behind my back

even cheated

i thought he was a dream

just a nightmare in disguise

the truth had come out later

and a lesson was learned from the beginning of my highschool life

© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA

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this is about a guy who broke my heart for not fulfilling his pleasures. he wanted bad and looked in the wrong direction.

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Raybaby SILVER said...
on Oct. 3 2014 at 11:18 am
Raybaby SILVER, Sulphur Ok, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039;The world isn&#039;t split between good people and death eaters. We&#039;ve all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That&#039;s who we really are.&quot;<br /> ~Sirius Black

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He went downhill after getting kicked out of band. I guess love isnt meant for people who idolize extracurricular activities. I dont regret the time i just wish it wasnt like it was. He is a mess and i no longer have to deal with him.
Raybaby SILVER said...
on Oct. 3 2014 at 11:16 am
Raybaby SILVER, Sulphur Ok, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039;The world isn&#039;t split between good people and death eaters. We&#039;ve all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the part we choose to act on. That&#039;s who we really are.&quot;<br /> ~Sirius Black

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Thanks. This guy was ridiculous i dont care how happy he made me i was treated like shit half the rime and didnt even know it.
Brooklynfyre PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 16 2014 at 7:57 am
Brooklynfyre PLATINUM, Warsaw, Indiana
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I can relate to this piece alot. This just recently happened to me aswell. I didn't fullful what he wished for, especially with the bad.
littlepiepschuim PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 15 2014 at 1:47 pm
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This is an awesome peice, very gripping, and it shows a story that almost every girl has felt.