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Take It Back

September 24, 2014
By TheMaskedPoet SILVER, Temple, Georgia
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"I wish I could be a little less dramatic, like a Kennedy when Camelot went down in Flames." -Miranda Lambert

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I wish I never did it,

But I can't go back on it now.

 

I know I've never met you,

But I wish I could make it up.

 

I was just being selfish

And never thought of you.

 

I'll never do what I did

To you or another

 

I guess they're right about

How lust makes you do crazy things.

© Bonnie K., San Antonio, TX

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This is about a huge mistake I made and it's my apology for it.

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bruisedmemories ELITE said...
on Oct. 2 2014 at 4:49 pm
bruisedmemories ELITE, Birdsboro, Pennsylvania
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&quot;When you&#039;re young, you can fly, but we trip on clouds &#039;cause we get too high&quot; -The Band Perry (Song: Don&#039;t Let Me Be Lonely)<br /> &quot;Cause no matter what, you&#039;ll never be alone&quot; -Lady Antebellum (Song: Compass)

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I absolutely love the ending! This poem really speaks the truth. It's structure is short and to the point, but it's speaks a lot for itself. Well done! Voted 5/5!
FlowerPetals BRONZE said...
on Oct. 1 2014 at 12:37 am
FlowerPetals BRONZE, Bedford, Texas
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Be in this life as a traveler.

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I really like how this is a true poem. Short yet deep at the same time. Though it's short, it says a lot in the words you have chosen. I noticed the poem ties back together from the first stanza to the fourth stanza.The last 2 lines really capture the nature of humans desires. 
Zz9PluralZAlpha said...
on Sep. 30 2014 at 7:30 pm
Zz9PluralZAlpha, Arlington Heights, Illinois
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&quot;Don&#039;t let schooling interfere with your education.&quot;<br /> <br /> -Mark Twain

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I loved the abstract feel about this poem. What as a reader would have liked though, would be some form of loose order to tie everything together. One thing I really liked in the beginning was that each couplet had a ray them scheme of 1st line: 7 syllables, 2nd line: 8 syllables. I was a bit startled, to be honest, when that didn't continue on the second half of the poem. Also, I loved the fact that this was an apology to someone you don't even know. I just thought that was pretty cool.