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October 14, 2014
By dis3nchant3d PLATINUM, Congers, New York
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Permanent Darkness

I'm in a dark pit, a dark, dark pit
And I'm trapped.
Nowhere to go. Nowhere to hide.
No one to go to
because they wouldn't understand.
I hear voices, voices surround me
But it's only me
Screaming without making a sound
Do you hear me?
You can't. I'm screaming
No one's left to hear me
Sinking deeper, deeper
Into this pit of darkness
Where no one wants to be
With no one left to help me
 

© Kriztille J., Briarwood, NY

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dis3nchant3d PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 20 2014 at 1:39 pm
dis3nchant3d PLATINUM, Congers, New York
21 articles 0 photos 7 comments

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&quot;Kids that wear black and listen to rock music aren&#039;t all satan worshippers or terrible people.&quot;<br /> - Andy Biersack

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Ahh some typos in there, sorry 
dis3nchant3d PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 20 2014 at 1:38 pm
dis3nchant3d PLATINUM, Congers, New York
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Thanks so much swimmergirl! I honestly just sit down at write what I'm feeling, like when I wrote this, I was having a bad day. My poetry is like my real story, instead of what people see. I really appreciate your frredback, I'll post more soon!
dis3nchant3d PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 20 2014 at 1:36 pm
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Thank you :) 
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I love it.
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Wow this is powerful. Amazing job. I was blown away!!!!! Keep up the good work.