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The girl with the smile #2

May 12, 2015
By ABIGAIL.S PLATINUM, Trenton, Ohio
ABIGAIL.S PLATINUM, Trenton, Ohio
37 articles 3 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only you can start a change you want"


The girl with the smile
has much to hide.

She is a girl with the eyes
that glow with lies.

She is a girl with no hope
going on without pride.

The girl with the smile
could no longer hide.

The girl with the eyes
no longer wished to cry.

The girl with some hope
became stronger as the days passed by.

The girl with the smile
now shines so bright.



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gbremer SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2015 at 10:33 am
gbremer SILVER, Carlton, Minnesota
6 articles 11 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is both a blessing and a curse to feel everything so very deeply.

I think that this one is much better than the first (I still like the first one)! It tells more of a story.

Sayma35 said...
on May. 17 2015 at 6:31 pm
Sayma35, Miami, Florida
0 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
,,Great minds think,alone"

This is just great :)

on May. 14 2015 at 3:55 pm
SugarLover127 SILVER, Hartville, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where is personal gain and perseverance without a couple failures?

That's great! I think that it is lovely and much more positive than the first, although the first is amazing! I just love how this provides more hope.