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Sad Bells

May 22, 2015
By coolbeans101 SILVER, South San Francisco, California
coolbeans101 SILVER, South San Francisco, California
5 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Hear the funeral bells-
sad bells.
Cries that people shed
How they sniffle, sniffle, sniffle,
In the comforting place…
While, family thank those
All the friends that were close
With hugs and kisses,
Keep her in memories, memories,memories.



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on Oct. 20 2015 at 7:46 am
writer-violist DIAMOND, Jenks, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you.&rdquo; <br /> ― Maya Angelou, I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings

Great work! I like all of the reptition. Please keep writing! :)

on Jun. 17 2015 at 10:10 pm
alaina_h BRONZE, Wilmington, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe that happy girls are the prettiest girls. -Audrey Hepburn

I like the idea that you had for this....I think that you could elaborate on the feeling that you get when you're at a funeral...kind of heavy and dark. Also, watch you rhythm and tempo. I find that the less I try, the more things flow in a really smooth way. Could you possibly give me some feedback on one of my poems?? TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/807735/Humans/