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The forest eyes

July 19, 2015
By SomeoneMagical PLATINUM, Durham, New Hampshire
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Beneath the fallen feather leaves

The sun shrinks down beneath the trees

Falling down

Like rings of fire

Come the Rays, piercing

golden and

Pure.


They strike the

Golden

Crystal skies

Brightening the clouds

Visible to the eyes

Creating warped

Patterns on water

Delighting the eyes

Of the passing

beholder.


The forest

Awake

Brimming with life

Golden, pure

A great delight

One of nature's

Many treasures.

© Josh W., Peoria, AZ

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kayliee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2015 at 2:43 pm
kayliee BRONZE, Cininnati, Ohio
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this is very beautiful. I was wondering if you could give me some feedback on my poem mystery girl?
Cam_is_Away said...
on Jul. 24 2015 at 5:32 pm
Cam_is_Away, Non, California
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You use imagery very well in your poem. I can see the sunrise. Or at least, that's what it seems to be to me. Great job :-)
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2015 at 1:04 am
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very pretty, i have nothing bad to say about it, but still, wonderful. It's basically a change of seasons in my eyes lol
SomeoneMagical PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 21 2015 at 6:41 pm
SomeoneMagical PLATINUM, Durham, New Hampshire
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Feedback is appreciated; thanks.