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The Girl He Never Knew

February 19, 2016
By AWriter101 SILVER, Rockton, Illinois
AWriter101 SILVER, Rockton, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
being single doesn't mean you are week it means that you are strong enough to wait for what you deserve! -Niall Horan


He walks by the street
with no name,
and the girl he doesn’t know
exists.

She watches him go
by every day. She never goes out
to say hi. She’s afraid of what he’d say; that’s the reason
he doesn’t know the girl exists.

He walks by today, but something steals
his eyes from the road ahead. Two blue eyes.
Staring out a window. The girl
he never knew.

She sees him looking her way,
her breath is stolen. Chocolate eyes.
He turns and walks down the street with no name
towards the girl he never knew.

He sees her blink; try to figure this out.
Knocking on the door, he hoped she’d answer.
The door opened; but just a crack, and to the girl he never knew
he said, “Hey!”


The author's comments:

I wrote this last year for a Creative Writing class and was just wondering what other writers might think. Enjoy!


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on Feb. 23 2016 at 11:57 pm
AWriter101 SILVER, Rockton, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
being single doesn't mean you are week it means that you are strong enough to wait for what you deserve! -Niall Horan

haha! yeah I wrote this for a class and it just wrote itself!! lol

on Feb. 23 2016 at 11:52 pm
Wordfreak SILVER, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;He who makes a beast out of himself gets rid of the pain of being a man.&quot; - Doc Johnson<br /> &quot;It&#039;s not the size of the dog in the fight. It&#039;s the size of the fight in the dog.&quot; -Ivan Moody, FFDP

Very positive twist at the end. Love it!