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Total Ruination

November 28, 2016
By fragmentaations DIAMOND, Middleburgh, New York
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It was a wet evening.
We tore down the house,
then took the wood
and set it alight
in the back yard.
Those mice that escaped
axe and fire
drowned in the rain. 

© Ellen S., Franklin, KY

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Based off the poem "Complete Destruction" by William Carlos Williams for a poetry project. 

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