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February 11, 2018
By reach4mars GOLD, State College, Pennsylvania
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reach4mars GOLD, State College, Pennsylvania
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I already know how it ends, I'm just here for the ride :)

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Ravishing nightmares
But they were just moldy dreams
Fresh ecstasy
Forms a new reality

A matted mirage
Of luminescent thoughts
A naive little heart
And her dream starts to rot

Dehydrated lover
Tears her innocent heart
Broken little girl
Her utopia torn apart

Velvety love is not what is seems
No hero in white, she holds no belief

No longer persuaded by these plastic fantasies
And the man dressed in white with a trick
up his sleeve

© Monica L., St. George, UT

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Just a little poetry :) 

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reach4mars GOLD said...
on Apr. 20 2018 at 9:44 am
reach4mars GOLD, State College, Pennsylvania
16 articles 44 photos 211 comments

Favorite Quote:
I already know how it ends, I'm just here for the ride :)

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Thank you so much! :)
WolfWhisperer0911 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2018 at 9:02 am
WolfWhisperer0911 BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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@reach4mars Congrats! How come I saw it now! I am so happy for you!
MaskedGhost said...
on Mar. 23 2018 at 6:31 pm
MaskedGhost, Hadley, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;My head&#039;s so tired but I don&#039;t care, no I don&#039;t <br /> Outside the sky looks like it&#039;s burning down but <br /> I won&#039;t fear, no I won&#039;t <br /> Falling down like angels fighting <br /> Stars and lightening hold me tightly&quot; - Hazel: by Cavetown

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You're welcome :)
reach4mars GOLD said...
on Mar. 11 2018 at 9:26 pm
reach4mars GOLD, State College, Pennsylvania
16 articles 44 photos 211 comments

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I already know how it ends, I&#039;m just here for the ride :)

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Thank you so much! I'm glad you like the poem :)
MaskedGhost said...
on Mar. 8 2018 at 11:18 pm
MaskedGhost, Hadley, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;My head&#039;s so tired but I don&#039;t care, no I don&#039;t <br /> Outside the sky looks like it&#039;s burning down but <br /> I won&#039;t fear, no I won&#039;t <br /> Falling down like angels fighting <br /> Stars and lightening hold me tightly&quot; - Hazel: by Cavetown

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...wow. I listened to your cover of We Don't Believe What's on Tv, which was great btw. But this is amazing. Great job!