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Without You

November 9, 2021
By smaddie24 PLATINUM, Cityland, Wisconsin
smaddie24 PLATINUM, Cityland, Wisconsin
28 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Light shines brightest in the deepest dark!”<br /> -Jim Butcher


I am now empty

A hole residing within

Everything I am


The author's comments:

I just had a sudden burst of inspiration, and this is what came out.


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Afra ELITE said...
on Nov. 21 2021 at 12:34 pm
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Nice haiku...Keep writing...

Check mine out...Vote it if you like it...
TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/1144140/True-Love

on Nov. 15 2021 at 1:46 pm
Rsnail-925 PLATINUM, Boulder, Colorado
29 articles 11 photos 106 comments

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A story has as many versions as it has readers - Winter Of Our Discontent

I love it! Very direct and clear, great haiku.