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September 24, 2009
By Taliaaa BRONZE, Medford, Massachusetts
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Taliaaa BRONZE, Medford, Massachusetts
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I wish I were a glow worm, a glow worm's never glum. I mean, how could you be grumpy when the sun shines out your bum? ;]

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splash
cool water
refreshing
h2o
runs
flows
dribbles
down
a stream
a brook
a lake
the ocean
colorless
odorless
tasteless

splish
warm water
relaxing
melts
soothes
swims
down
a stream
a brook
a lake
the ocean
colorless
odorless
tasteless


shh........

© Dana H., Wichita Falls, TX

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KelseyBear BRONZE said...
on Apr. 17 2012 at 9:09 am
KelseyBear BRONZE, Cuba, New York
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"Although it is generally known, I think it's time to announce that I was born at a very young age"

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I loved this!

I really liked how it flows when you read it, just like water!

BriannaM. SILVER said...
on Mar. 19 2011 at 9:37 pm
BriannaM. SILVER, Keller, Texas
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one word: wow!
Taliaaa BRONZE said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 3:52 pm
Taliaaa BRONZE, Medford, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I wish I were a glow worm, a glow worm's never glum. I mean, how could you be grumpy when the sun shines out your bum? ;]

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Thanks so much :)
TheOcherousRodentia PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 10:30 pm
TheOcherousRodentia PLATINUM, Toronto, Other
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&quot;Life is infinitely growing;<br /> It&#039;s capacity of love and fear is impossible<br /> To calculate by the means of math, or<br /> The properties of science, and to conatain<br /> Its ferious unpredictability is only a virtue<br /> That humans despire

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Just Beautiful.
Taliaaa BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 7:36 pm
Taliaaa BRONZE, Medford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
I wish I were a glow worm, a glow worm&#039;s never glum. I mean, how could you be grumpy when the sun shines out your bum? ;]

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Sure! I'd love to! And thanks so much!!! :)
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 7:28 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

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sure anytime. I luv readin poemz & ur really good sooo ya :P i submitted alot of poemz also, so it'd b gr8 if u could read some when they get on here :)
Taliaaa BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 5:39 pm
Taliaaa BRONZE, Medford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
I wish I were a glow worm, a glow worm&#039;s never glum. I mean, how could you be grumpy when the sun shines out your bum? ;]

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Ha ha, thanks! It wasn't supposed to be in the Haiku section, but they must have put it there by mistake! Oh well! And also the name was supposed to be different I think I had changed a different poem to this one right before I sent it in and forgot to change the name.... thanks for reading it anyways!
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 5:36 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

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this is so kOoL. gr8 repetition
Taliaaa BRONZE said...
on Nov. 22 2009 at 7:19 am
Taliaaa BRONZE, Medford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
I wish I were a glow worm, a glow worm&#039;s never glum. I mean, how could you be grumpy when the sun shines out your bum? ;]

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Thanks so much! I actually wrote this a little over a year ago so I think I've matured more and I've become a better writer. I'll be posting more stuff soon!
Phantom_Girl GOLD said...
on Oct. 14 2009 at 4:52 pm
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
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&quot;If it comes out of the lion&#039;s mouth...it will be on the test.&quot;<br /> -Mr. Bala

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Love it! Great use of repetition. Keep writing. This is amazing.
Taliaaa BRONZE said...
on Oct. 6 2009 at 4:33 pm
Taliaaa BRONZE, Medford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
I wish I were a glow worm, a glow worm&#039;s never glum. I mean, how could you be grumpy when the sun shines out your bum? ;]

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thanks! i was inspired by like water reflecting with da sun to make a rainbow thing
Kota21 said...
on Oct. 6 2009 at 8:26 am
ok there are many things i liked abouth this poem it was very descriptive and i really could image some of the thing u were saying i also liked the shhh part of how it ended it was cool and also i m doing this for a school thingy so yeeah i didnt like how i got confused to much