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Train MAG

October 30, 2009
By Anonymous

Does thinking about
if you think about me, count
as thinking of you?

© Anonymous

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theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 27 2014 at 1:41 pm
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Can&#039;t keep my eyes from the circling sky,<br /> Tongue-tied and twisted<br /> Just an earth-bound misfit, I&quot;<br /> ~Pink Floyd<br /> <br /> &quot;Now is blessed<br /> The rest<br /> remembered &quot; <br /> <br /> ~Jim Morrison

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I will forever love this poem. This is beautiful and amazing. I love this. This is one of the best haiku's i've ever read on here. :)
LunarBirth GOLD said...
on Oct. 20 2013 at 10:12 am
LunarBirth GOLD, Edinburg, Texas
16 articles 3 photos 30 comments

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&quot;celebrate true nonconformity&quot; - LunarBirth

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I like it but what does the title symbolize??
Kestrel PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2012 at 3:22 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
29 articles 11 photos 189 comments

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-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

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Okay i just went back and reread it again because i was going to through all my favorites, and again i ask, you, Sir or Madam Anonymous: why is it called Train??? 
Kestrel PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 19 2012 at 6:02 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
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-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

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I think I had to read this four times before my brain truly appreciated it. I like it, though I don't understand the significance of calling it Train?
Jawsman21 said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:41 pm
Jawsman21, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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great haiku, it really makes you think
Bennytheman8 SILVER said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:39 pm
Bennytheman8 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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maybe your just stupid. just kidding! I agree
Bennytheman8 SILVER said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:37 pm
Bennytheman8 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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This is so good! I think it could flow a little better though.
bradysmith said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:35 pm
bradysmith, Waukesha WI, Wisconsin
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very confusing but makes you think good job
nickisreallycool BRONZE said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:35 pm
nickisreallycool BRONZE, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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This messes with my mind, very good!
bmoney22 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:33 pm
bmoney22 BRONZE, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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why dont you get away from me donkey!!!!!

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confusing but makes you think I LIKE IT!!!!!
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 11 2011 at 6:03 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&lrm;&quot;I&rsquo;m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don&rsquo;t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world.&quot; - Beyonc&eacute;

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Though it is kinda repetitive, I enjoyed this!!!
silence-is-loud GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 10:32 pm
silence-is-loud GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY, STING LIKE A BEE- MUHAMMID ALI

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aww so short sweet and clever!!! I ponder this all the time
forgottenpenname GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2011 at 8:15 pm
forgottenpenname GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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&quot;Carpe diem.&quot;

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I love it! :)
Rowan O&#39Shea BRONZE said...
on Jan. 4 2011 at 3:37 pm
Rowan O&#39Shea BRONZE, Tadworth, Other
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so so so good! :)
Alia_S._Tan BRONZE said...
on Jan. 3 2011 at 8:19 pm
Alia_S._Tan BRONZE, Elk Grove, California
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I do not know who wrote this quote, by it&#039;s my favorite! &quot;He handed her twelve roses, eleven real and one fake. *I love you till the last one dies*.&quot;-anonymous

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Lots of meaning in this haiku! I luv it since i know how tht feels. Keep it up!
lollypops GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2011 at 7:56 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
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Live

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nice short ans simple
justsmileanddance PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 1 2011 at 2:17 pm
justsmileanddance PLATINUM, Montgomery, Alabama
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yes it does! i love this! it got me confused at first but now i get it and i like it! 
BrittieVee SILVER said...
on Dec. 31 2010 at 12:29 pm
BrittieVee SILVER, Torbay, Other
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&quot;Wow I can&#039;t belive I won,<br /> This is awesome,<br /> Don&#039;t trip and fall,<br /> I&#039;m gonna get to thank the fans,<br /> This is so cool,<br /> Oh kany&#039;e west is here,<br /> Cool haircut,<br /> What are ya doing there...<br /> Ouch...<br /> I guess I&#039;m not gonna get to thank the fans&quot;<br /> &mdash; Taylor Swift &lt;3

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short and simple, but so much meaning :) i love it
KAT.CH GOLD said...
on Dec. 30 2010 at 11:42 pm
KAT.CH GOLD, Chennai, Other
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simple wordings but presents a beautiful picture in a mind
mjhubbert BRONZE said...
on Dec. 30 2010 at 7:47 pm
mjhubbert BRONZE, Gold River, California
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This is really spectacular!  I didn't know such an idea could fit into 17 syllables.