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You Come Too

January 29, 2010
By PaulieV BRONZE, Grand Junction, Michigan
PaulieV BRONZE, Grand Junction, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
sports don't build character....they reveal it.


I’m going to clean my room today
I’ll only stop to see my poster of Matthew McCounohey
And get yelled at because I’m day dreaming away
I wont take long, you come too.

I’m going out to the movies with some friends
We’ll go to the movies, then end up at the mall
Were I’ll buy a pretty dress then we’ll go to the ball
It shouldn’t take long, you come too.


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for fun :)

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on Nov. 15 2010 at 11:32 am
CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

"I’M going out to clean the pasture spring; I’ll only stop to rake the leaves away (And wait to watch the water clear, I may): I sha’n’t be gone long.—You come too.   I’m going out to fetch the little calf         5 That’s standing by the mother. It’s so young, It totters when she licks it with her tongue. I sha’n’t be gone long.—You come too."

No its called the Pasture by robert frost. But you wrote a good poem 


on Nov. 15 2010 at 11:30 am
CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

It kind of has the beat of this other poem i think its called Down to the lower field.