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Drowning in your soul

May 28, 2010
By foreverwelsh BRONZE, Cardiff, Other
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foreverwelsh BRONZE, Cardiff, Other
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"Thin, like butter over too much bread" JRR Tolkien

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Not falling in love
But sinking in perfection
Hold me close to you

Drowning in your soul
Your hazel eyes enfold me
Please don’t let me go

© Jen B., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
We had to write haikus in an English lesson, so I just wrote whatever came into my head. Hope you like it!
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foreverwelsh BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2010 at 10:50 am
foreverwelsh BRONZE, Cardiff, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Thin, like butter over too much bread" JRR Tolkien

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thank you so much! getting comments really means a lot to me especially when they're so nice! :D
DevinQuin GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2010 at 5:58 pm
DevinQuin GOLD, Norwalk, Iowa
12 articles 8 photos 14 comments

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"If it would be revealed or demonstrated that there is no future state (heaven), my advice to every man, woman, and child would be, as our existence would be in our own power, to take opium." - John Adams

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The way you just took something so short and made it sound so beautiful and contain so much meaning is amazing! I am baffled out how you just did that!
foreverwelsh BRONZE said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 10:53 am
foreverwelsh BRONZE, Cardiff, Other
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"Thin, like butter over too much bread" JRR Tolkien

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thanks!! glad you liked it :D
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2010 at 11:05 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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aww that was beautifully said. :) i liked it very much!!