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June 16, 2010
By Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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I make it clear that
Our door is closed forever
But you keep knocking.

© Chris F., Pequannock, NJ

The author's comments:
Another point of view about love and how if you really love someone, you'll fight for them.
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Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 8:17 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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It was short but there are alot of ways you can interpret it. I liked it:) Please comment and rate my work:)
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Nov. 13 2010 at 10:01 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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thankyou so much and dont worry about it i will!!
stephie95 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 7:56 am
stephie95 PLATINUM, Tripoli, Other
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it really good.. simple and nice.. can u plz check nd comment my work!! thx
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Aug. 14 2010 at 8:45 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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kk:))))))))
kiwi12 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 14 2010 at 8:44 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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your welcome, for sure. check out some of my stuff too, if you can.
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Aug. 14 2010 at 6:11 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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ummm thankyou-i think:)
kiwi12 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 14 2010 at 3:07 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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At first, I thought this was really stupid, because I've always found it annoying when people are persistant even though you closed the door. Then, I sort of laughed because there are many sides to this poem. I like it.
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 9:56 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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thanks!!!!:)
lamelola GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 9:53 pm
lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
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The problem is, you think you have time.

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Great saying :)
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:15 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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thankyou and of course:)
MelanieLouise PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 2:20 pm
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
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to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

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very good :) i like your writing. could you rate and comment on some of mine? i would love to hear your opinion :)
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 11:07 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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thanks!!!:)
Shahed GOLD said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 9:10 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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Nice nice!!

Good job! :)))

Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 6:04 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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Wow thankyou so much!! i will for sure:)
writingchick GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 6:00 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
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&quot;Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase.&quot;

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That was like super super super good! i love it! very creative! probably the best hauki i've ever read! great job :) if you could rate on comment on my work when you get the chance i'd appreiate it :)