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May 31, 2011
By SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

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I have a secret
It is quite evil and dark
No one will know it

© Feichen Z., McLean, VA

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i thought about someone who is keeping a secret from the world
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sherberteater GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 5:30 pm
sherberteater GOLD, Fruita, Colorado
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&quot;Friends are God&#039;s way of apologizing to us for our families.&quot;<br /> <br /> Thank God for friends like you!

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Hey, I glad to help anytime. Good luck with the rest of the poem.

 

SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 3:10 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

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I should have done that, I'll fix this poem as soon as I can thanks
sherberteater GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 2:49 pm
sherberteater GOLD, Fruita, Colorado
13 articles 13 photos 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Friends are God&#039;s way of apologizing to us for our families.&quot;<br /> <br /> Thank God for friends like you!

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Well, you could of handed it in at school as a haiku, and then when he handed it back to you could of changed it to a normal length poem.

 

SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 2:38 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

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I know I should have but I wrote this during school and my teacher told me a huiku had to be short
sherberteater GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 1:54 pm
sherberteater GOLD, Fruita, Colorado
13 articles 13 photos 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Friends are God&#039;s way of apologizing to us for our families.&quot;<br /> <br /> Thank God for friends like you!

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I agree, you should of made it longer. You could of gone more in depth why they were keeping this secret from the world. Or you could of told us clues about this secret.

 

Manish9 SILVER said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 4:18 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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yup ... agree wid sakina ....
sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:38 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
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A negative thinker See&#039;s a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u&#039;ll surely B successful in LIFE.<br /> -Hazrat Ali (A.S)

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Shart and Nice..Maybe u should've Written some more line..