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Fish Pond

June 26, 2011
By SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

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Orange,Yellow fish
Swimming in my pond of blue
Wandering for food

© Eliza H., Tiboli, NY

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I thought of beautiful fish swimming in a pond:)
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stupendousman BRONZE said...
on Sep. 23 2012 at 12:31 am
stupendousman BRONZE, Peoria, Arizona
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&quot;Hey, guys, if there&#039;s no wind, there&#039;s nothing to blow the leaves around.&quot; - from &quot;Sons of Provo&quot;<br /> &quot;Tough times never last, but tough people do&quot;<br /> &quot;the best things in life aren&#039;t things&quot;

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i care to disagree. this is a haiku, correct? so there would only be three lines. personally, i like the simplicity of it. it annoys me when people make things too complicated.
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 31 2011 at 12:36 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

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Sorry I'm still a beginner at poetry, thank you so much and I'll also work on this poem. Thank you so much again:)
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
on Dec. 30 2011 at 6:38 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~<br /> ~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~<br /> ~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than<br /> a distant memory.~

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I apologize , first off , because I am about to honestly criticize this. The poem was rather uninteresting and it didn't capture my attention or make me feel anything as a reader it really had no meaning or emotion and seemed like random thoughts strung together. It was okay , but your poetry needs some work. *