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The Break Up

August 25, 2012
By LittleLadybird GOLD, Carrickfergus, Other
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LittleLadybird GOLD, Carrickfergus, Other
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To be nobody but yourself in a world that is trying it's hardest every night and day to change you into everyone else is to fight the hardest battle a human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

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Don’t leave me here for
My heart is slowly breaking.
My love - I miss you.

© Ashley W., Port Charlotte, FL

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liberalartist GOLD said...
on Jun. 4 2013 at 7:12 pm
liberalartist GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
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Poeta nasicur, non fit. (a poet is born, not made)

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i agree with jade, but it is still awesome
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Jun. 4 2013 at 5:30 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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A little simplistic, I think if you write about breakups, especially in the limited form of a haiku, you need a really unique take/perspective on it. But it's still ok!