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Moving On MAG

September 29, 2008
By Anonymous

I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today

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MrAbyss PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 26 2023 at 4:50 pm
MrAbyss PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
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“Normality is a paved road, but no flowers grow on it.” -Vincent Van Gogh

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Incredibly well written. It’s very relatable, haikus are hard to write.
ILiveToRead PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 27 2022 at 2:43 pm
ILiveToRead PLATINUM, Wailuku, Hawaii
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ooh sh!t
MIKEROTCH said...
on Nov. 12 2018 at 2:51 pm
MIKEROTCH, Amarillo, Texas
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Good Boi
AfricanKing DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 11 2017 at 7:05 pm
AfricanKing DIAMOND, Warner Robins, Georgia
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Only you and I can help the sun rise each morning. If we don't, it may drench itself out in sorrow - Joan Baez

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Thank you so much for this amazing work!
MysticMusic ELITE said...
on Mar. 7 2015 at 6:43 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
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&ldquo;You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.&rdquo; -Mae West<br /> &quot;It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things.&quot; - Leonardo Da Vinci

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Recount the syllables. There are 7 syllables in the second line.
Kimberly Behling said...
on Mar. 21 2013 at 8:51 am
Kimberly Behling, Ehrhardt, South Carolina
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very good!!!! :)))
Kestrel PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 3 2013 at 4:27 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
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-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

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Sometimes, yes, but in the "olden days" it was pronounced 'pome' as it is here, making the count correct. :) 
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 12:01 am
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
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Life isn&#039;t measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.<br /> <br /> You are only as strong as your weakest link.

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Great job! 
incognito411 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 3 2012 at 3:52 pm
incognito411 BRONZE, Kirkwood, Missouri
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&ldquo;Things change. And friends leave. Life doesn&#039;t stop for anybody.&rdquo; <br /> ― Stephen Chbosky

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Out/all/the/pomes/that/I/wrote its not 2 syllables, its just that ur all saying it wrong.
AnthonyDavidHall PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 13 2012 at 1:35 pm
AnthonyDavidHall PLATINUM, Valrico, Florida
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&quot;Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth.&quot; - Oscar Wilde

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"Poem" is 2 syllables. Your count is off.
Misfit95 said...
on Oct. 12 2012 at 7:18 pm
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I absolutely LOVE this poem; I keep re-reading it. 
Dreamgirl95 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 14 2012 at 2:12 pm
Dreamgirl95 BRONZE, Sugarland, Texas
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This is amazing. It's so short but soo powerful! Great work!
JessicaQ PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 21 2012 at 9:19 pm
JessicaQ PLATINUM, North Vancouver, British Columbia, Other
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Hehe I love this :) do little words but so much meaning! Check out my stuff too?
WhatsYourStory SILVER said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 1:28 pm
WhatsYourStory SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
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&quot;Believe it or not, you are in control of your own life. you are the reason why you&#039;re sad. And you are the reason why you&#039;re happy. So don&#039;t wait for happiness. Go out and find it. Right now. And don&#039;t let anyone else tell you otherwise.&quot;

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I love this<3
little-bird-girl GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 9:04 am
little-bird-girl GOLD, Flemington, New Jersey
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&quot;For poise, walk with the knowledge that you never walk alone.&quot;

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I can totally relate. Lovely work! You conveyed such a powerful image with so few words.
Parishrut BRONZE said...
on Mar. 31 2012 at 11:56 am
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Good poem (pronounced 'pome')!
keekybear BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 11:02 pm
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this is super good; I absoluteley LOVE it
aphids77 said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 6:09 pm
aphids77, Holly Springs, North Carolina
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IRONY. Very fine. Very brief. Very effective.
ElleNicole BRONZE said...
on Dec. 31 2011 at 9:37 am
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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&quot;My role in society, or any artist&#039;s or poet&#039;s role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all.&quot;

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I like it. =) Mind checking out my work? Thanks!
CoolBreeze PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 31 2011 at 2:51 am
CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
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The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

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I like it but you have to many syllables in the 2nd line a haiku is 5 7 5 not 5 8 5 but its still pretty well written.