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A THOUGH GIRL

January 31, 2014
By Irdina BRONZE, Manjung, Other
Irdina BRONZE, Manjung, Other
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
" just be yourself "


She has a small eye,
She has cute nose,
She has a pretty face,
She has a black hair,
She has a nice family,
She has a nice friend,
She always makes people laugh,
One day, she walked to school,
She really happy to go,
She sang along the journey,
But…
Suddenly,
BANG!
She accident! With a car,
Her face was bad,
She had to do therapy,
She sad, she even tried to know cried,
She never show her sadness to us,
And…
She never looked for pity,
Or sympathy from you.
That's why she'll always be,
The strongest girl I ever knew.



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on Oct. 28 2015 at 11:42 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

You're welcome, Irdina. :)

Irdina BRONZE said...
on Oct. 25 2015 at 9:53 am
Irdina BRONZE, Manjung, Other
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
" just be yourself "

Will do, cause now im so busy with schools hm sorry for the late reply.. its been a year tho @MichaelFender

Irdina BRONZE said...
on Oct. 25 2015 at 9:52 am
Irdina BRONZE, Manjung, Other
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
" just be yourself "

@MissEmilyDickinson thanks! yeah i'll improve it and thanks again :)

Irdina BRONZE said...
on Oct. 25 2015 at 9:45 am
Irdina BRONZE, Manjung, Other
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
" just be yourself "

Will do, cause now im so busy with schools hm sorry for the late reply.. its been a year tho

Irdina BRONZE said...
on Oct. 25 2015 at 9:44 am
Irdina BRONZE, Manjung, Other
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
" just be yourself "

thanks! yeah i'll improve it and thanks again :)

on Sep. 18 2014 at 9:55 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I love it. This has a lot of emotion and is very descriptive. There were a few mistakes, but all in all, it's a wonderful poem. It's has a lot of strength and power. You have talent. Thank you for sharing this. ^_^

on Sep. 18 2014 at 9:45 am
Necromancer PLATINUM, Cedar Creek, Texas
21 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live life like There is no tomorrow"

It looks good keep on writing.