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The Old Mouse

January 7, 2022
By mouserstothemax BRONZE, Lapeer, Michigan
mouserstothemax BRONZE, Lapeer, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm kind of busy today. I got things to do, places to cheese" - TB
"supervillainy's a tough racket"- TB


There was an old mouse who could bake

What wonderful things he could make

Dozens of tarts

Worked dough like the arts

But could never bake a cake


The author's comments:

Wrote this cause I like mice and baking. Enjoy!


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Afra ELITE said...
on Mar. 6 2022 at 4:30 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

The last line was an unexpected twist...The poem was so beautiful...I enjoyed reading it...♡♡♡

DewDrop27 GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2022 at 10:41 am
DewDrop27 GOLD, Charlton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
“You fail only if you stop writing.” ~ Ray Bradbury

Aww this is such a cute and creative poem! Poor mouse though, just couldn't bake a cake. Good job! :)