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January 25, 2013
By Larsen SILVER, Minneapolis, Kansas
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Larsen SILVER, Minneapolis, Kansas
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pain is real-Have it come natural, not on perpose.

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Stars are very bright.
very, very, bright.
Our sun is one.
one look, your done.
Our stars are very bright!

© Alex T., Monticello, IL

The author's comments:
my brother who was looking for clouds one day asked me "why is the sun so bright?" i told him the scientific explatnation... the gamma rays hurt your eyes and so does the infared( which causes sun burns..... so here you go bro!!!...hey that rhymes <3
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PirateCountry DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 6 2013 at 7:06 pm
PirateCountry DIAMOND, Muncie, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I don&#039;t know half of you half as well as I should like and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve.&quot;

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Oh, I certainly will!
Larsen SILVER said...
on Feb. 6 2013 at 2:40 pm
Larsen SILVER, Minneapolis, Kansas
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pain is real-Have it come natural, not on perpose.

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thank you! :) you should also check out my other poem about lies and myths. it is called "Lies are Lies"  
PirateCountry DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 5:11 pm
PirateCountry DIAMOND, Muncie, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I don&#039;t know half of you half as well as I should like and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve.&quot;

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Stars are bright, aren't they? Good job! I loved it! It's short and sweet and to the point.