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Crazy Loon

April 16, 2014
By BTDTuttle GOLD, McRae, Georgia
BTDTuttle GOLD, McRae, Georgia
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Haters Make Me Famous


There once was a man named loon
Who lived in a big lagoon
He refused to eat
Then fell down on meat
Now his death came quite too soon



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on Apr. 23 2014 at 12:57 pm
OakwoodCat GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
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&ldquo;Friendship is born at that moment when one person says to another: &quot;What! You too? I thought I was the only one.&rdquo; <br /> ― C.S. Lewis

Good poem, but maybe try adding some stronger verbs or more descriptive adjectives to make your writing more interesting. :) Keep Writing!