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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.

© Adam B., Highland Village, TX

The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.
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System_Error_26 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 17 2021 at 11:19 pm
System_Error_26 PLATINUM, Edmond, Oklahoma
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I know how you feel, I've felt this way before when my boyfriend lied to me for months and then left me.
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I'm looking for a song for my website called Life's a Song, So Sing It. If any of you could write me one, and the best one I like will get a shout you out on my Socials.
hanna4868 said...
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i love it. please make this into a song!!!
newteenboi said...
on Aug. 21 2020 at 10:36 am
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THIS WAS GREAT!!!! It really stirred up emotion and I loved it!!!
annabanana03 said...
on Jul. 21 2020 at 10:44 pm
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Well written! It was filled with emotion and power. Very deep. I loved it. Keep it up!
lea_f910 said...
on May. 30 2020 at 12:11 am
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this was a beautiful poem and it would be an amazing song
KatelynnNicole said...
on Mar. 9 2020 at 9:39 am
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I agree with @Armando, these lyrics really reached out, and it would be a great song.
_Armando said...
on Dec. 19 2019 at 1:37 pm
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Yo this hit me it was very good and you should make it into a actual song
claudia-padilla said...
on Dec. 19 2019 at 1:32 pm
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I like the emotion in your song. I think this is very powerful.
Goku_Nativeson said...
on Dec. 13 2019 at 11:52 am
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Tour very good
jmeeks said...
on Dec. 3 2019 at 2:41 pm
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this is very powerful, you are a talented writer.
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this is really bad and horrible. plz dont do this...just STOP! it scared me
alaskanbeelover BRONZE said...
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What genre is this song supposed to be?
The vibe I'm getting is a mix between Billie Eilish and TØP.
kim2004 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2019 at 10:42 am
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I love the emotion in the poem and how esally people can relate to it and it also really makes you think and i think its a beautiful symbol of of how teens feel
Xx_KodaWolf_xX said...
on Apr. 3 2019 at 9:00 am
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I love the emotion put into this! You must've really thought about it to make it this powerful. I would love to see it published and put on Spotify or something. Definitely worth the views.
kpipsforme_11 said...
on Mar. 26 2019 at 2:06 pm
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she must have gone through a breakup and turned into an emo/goth person who cuts their self to 'release the pain'
aivey19 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 5 2019 at 1:38 pm
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It really made me feeling something, and to me that is the whole purpose of poetry! Good Job!
liamobuach BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2019 at 9:34 am
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the tone is so irregular and it doesn't flow :(
liamobuach BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2019 at 9:16 am
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@MXRNXN i guess they never miss, huh.
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I have been trying to come up with a song, but this is way better than what i have set up. AMAZING!