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Gone.

October 21, 2009
By indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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The bright white walls
Enclosing on us
We realize that
You're no longer here

Dizziness and nausea
Doesn't compare to
All that we feel
Now that you are gone

The empty void
Blank pages in which
We fill with thoughts
With you still alive

Dark clouds come in
Don't know where from
Droplets pour down
We are quenched with loss

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Loveandboxing PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 3 2010 at 10:47 pm
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
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Eat, Sleep, Sing (by me)<br /> Writing is an art few people master it. -me

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that is g8 lov it. plz check out my stuff  thx u
Saphira96 SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 6:48 pm
Saphira96 SILVER, Crestwood, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
I have 3 but here they are:<br /> Truly Great friends are hard to find, difficult to leave, and impossible to forget.<br /> Life isn&#039;t measured by the number of breaths you take but by the moments that take your breath away. And the only problem is time.

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Your welcome! It reminds of a episode from the show Doctor Who! It's a sci-fi show with a love story and they get trapped from each other when all they want to do is be with each other! Its really good! i love it!
indiecaligurl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 5:24 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Aww thanks! That's really sweet :)
indiecaligurl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 5:21 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Thank you! Oh neat, what show?
indiecaligurl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 5:19 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Thanks so much :)
indiecaligurl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 5:18 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Thanks so much :)
kujo96 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 1:52 pm
kujo96 BRONZE, Dothan, Alabama
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MY DEATH IS YOUR GAIN

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very good i think tht should be in the magizine
Saphira96 SILVER said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 5:15 pm
Saphira96 SILVER, Crestwood, Kentucky
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I have 3 but here they are:<br /> Truly Great friends are hard to find, difficult to leave, and impossible to forget.<br /> Life isn&#039;t measured by the number of breaths you take but by the moments that take your breath away. And the only problem is time.

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That was really good! It reminded me of a episode from my favorite show!
Reaa.Mae.Kuzyk GOLD said...
on Nov. 9 2009 at 11:30 am
Reaa.Mae.Kuzyk GOLD, Arborg, Manitoba, Other
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&quot;Why live trying to just DIE, when people are DYING just for the chance to LIVE.&quot;<br /> -Anomynous<br /> <br /> &quot;Time has a wonderful way of showing us what really matters.&quot;<br /> - Margaret Peters

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It was awesome :) <3 Nice work.
L@L@girl PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 30 2009 at 5:29 pm
L@L@girl PLATINUM, Traer, Iowa
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If there&#039;s a book you really want to read, but it hasn&#039;t been written yet, then you must write it. ~Toni Morrison

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I really liked it!!!
indiecaligurl PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 2:49 am
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Thank you!
Katie[: GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 9:16 am
Katie[: GOLD, Columbus, Indiana
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&quot;Live life to the fullest, and like there won&#039;t be a tomorrow.&quot;

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Wow that is really good.