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"Deceiving Love"

November 30, 2009
By CarrH BRONZE, Peru, Indiana
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CarrH BRONZE, Peru, Indiana
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&quot;Life is like a story, if you don&#039;t write it, someone else will&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Live, Laugh, Love&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;That which doesn&#039;t kill you makes you stronger&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;A shoe can change everything&quot;~ Cindrella<br /> <br /> &quot;Those that fear bad luck will only see the bad instead of the good&quot;<br /> <br /> It&#039;s better to be 30 mins. early, than 5 mins. late

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Because your stupid and I’m sad you said the words we did not have while I’m laying on the floor. You gave excuses and your lies and you still walk with your head high, now I’m crying on the floor. You ask me out I say ok I can’t help but think you’ve changed leave me dying on the floor. I guess things will never be the same don’t want to play these stupid games so I’ll show you to the door.

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I think everyone can relate to this poem. As I kept writing it turned into a short song!
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Lonleydandy said...
on Dec. 23 2009 at 5:53 pm
I agree with wanghui, it is a little short...haha, it could be longer, but it is really good overall. I liked it in total.....just work on length!!!
wanghui138138 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 23 2009 at 2:45 pm
wanghui138138 BRONZE, Providence, Rhode Island
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&quot;Don&#039;t fear anything other than giving up.&quot;

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a little too short.

Powerful tho.