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March 23, 2010
By Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
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"and all you f***ers go beep beep beep in cheap,plastic cars. If It's to dumb to see or say you'll still sing it, and I'll just cue the applause" - Marilyn Manson

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Why didn't you tell me?
Why do i feel stupid now?
Why did i always let you bring me down?
Now i wish you were still in the ground.

I dare you to tell me goodbye
I dare you to finally die
I dare you to go back down
I dare you to tell me goodbye

Your hands, so cold
Just like that one winter
And now I, I don't know
If your a corpse or its just in my head?

I dare you to tell me goodbye
I dare you to finally die
I dare you to go back down
I dare you to tell me goodbye

I don't want you anymore you're too cold.

I'm sorry baby, you're too cold.

I dare you to tell me goodbye
I dare you to finally die
I dare you to go back down
I dare you to tell me goodbye.

Please just die, i don't want you anymore.
Baby, I'm sorry i can't have you anymore.

© Thomas S., Portville, NY

The author's comments:
I wrote this about a guy who lost his partner, and turned to drugs to heal himself... but in using drugs he dug up the corpse and tried to convince himself they were alive... but now they won't leave, and he has decided he has had enough.

I hope by reading this, people understand that drugs don't help anything, and that when something is gone, its gone... Nothing can bring it back, contrary to popular belief.
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BabyV GOLD said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 6:43 pm
BabyV GOLD, Jachksoville, Florida
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A really good poet write so that the reader can walk in their shoes just for that one minute. Victoria Jones

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Wow this is a song i would want to listen 2 one day. I can definetaly relate
Writingstar SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 7:21 pm
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ery good this should go in the teen ink magazine :)
respecturself7 SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 3:37 pm
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Wow, It's really dark, deliciously so. It kinda freaks me out a little. The tone is filled with bitterness and mourning, resentment and longing. nice.
IvyVine SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 9:29 am
IvyVine SILVER, Unknown, Indiana
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Once again you have an amazing peice written with amazing talent! This one does somewhat seem kind of shorter for a song but then I guess not all songs are that long.
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I admire the way you write. It reminds me of about 2 or 3 of my own works. Just of what I've seen of your writings, you're incredibly intelligent and I'd take into true consideration any comment or review left by you on any of my poems. I'm hoping to get more up soon. I have hundreds upon hundreds...too many to upload them all. Only the best.
korhel said...
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Have you created music to this?  I would love to hear it with a tune=]
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD said...
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I like this. It has a demanding voice about it.
JoetheBlanc GOLD said...
on May. 27 2010 at 9:36 am
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wow. u must've really hurt. amazing piece
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM said...
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AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
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Another great piece!:) I really love the message you're sending!!!This is full of so much emotion and truth! Amazing!:)
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 11:56 am
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
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&quot;and all you f***ers go beep beep beep in cheap,plastic cars. If It&#039;s to dumb to see or say you&#039;ll still sing it, and I&#039;ll just cue the applause&quot; - Marilyn Manson

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Yeah... Ive actually had three different melodies, i cant pick which one i like best though.
juliette said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 4:20 am
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I was almost crying while reading it. And that's saying something, I'm not moved to tears so easily.

Really, really intense

Do you have a melody for that?

SirSeba BRONZE said...
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beautifully written, and I love how you put up some background info for the poem. I love the structure and wording. Kudos to you!
Loveandboxing PLATINUM said...
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oooo i love it!!!
WonderDreamer23 BRONZE said...
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this is deep i like it i wish i could have talent like you:) keep workingnnnnggg
LikeToPlayFish GOLD said...
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I love it, it was just great.

please check out some of mine i'm really good but not that noticed

SarClark BRONZE said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 6:12 pm
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Yes, definitely. I totally agree with WriteIdea. Amazing structure. Great. 
thewriteidea DIAMOND said...
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Wow this is really intense! I like how you put the background information. Readers usually like to know where the meaning of the poem originates from. Nice job! Check out some of my work too, if you'd like. Keep writing!