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unnamed song

May 9, 2010
By BCS248 GOLD, Calgary, Other
BCS248 GOLD, Calgary, Other
12 articles 2 photos 6 comments

verse;
why do we car for the trails of this world
why do place our faith in the ones around us
why seek out comfort from those who do not care
why set ourselves up for loss when we do not need to
chorus;
we've been set free for all to see
no fear nor pain no straying path
can every separate us from his love

The author's comments:
so this is a song i started writing a couple months ago and i just can't find the word to finish it. also i need to decide on a name still

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TheJust ELITE said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 7:27 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they&rsquo;re told.&quot;-Skandar Keynes<br /> <br /> &quot;When it&rsquo;

haha, that's ttly fine :)

BCS248 GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 4:28 pm
BCS248 GOLD, Calgary, Other
12 articles 2 photos 6 comments
hey thanks I finally finished it although it still doesn't have a name. I did use one of your line I hope you dont mInd 

TheJust ELITE said...
on May. 30 2010 at 8:26 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 945 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they&rsquo;re told.&quot;-Skandar Keynes<br /> <br /> &quot;When it&rsquo;

Why do we love the things that hurt us

Why trust those who only let us down

This is just what I got from reading this. It's very good! (feel free to use the lines if you wish :)