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Where you were.

July 9, 2010
By Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
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Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
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"and all you f***ers go beep beep beep in cheap,plastic cars. If It's to dumb to see or say you'll still sing it, and I'll just cue the applause" - Marilyn Manson

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All this time
We've been apart, so far apart.
But the whole time youve been in my heart.

When your in love.
You know your in love.
When you cant stop thinking about them.
When you just want to hold them.

They can't escape your brain.
Your thoughts are a broken train.
Stuck in one place, never going to move.

I've never felt this way.
about any other baby.
Youre the one and only.
No more sad and lonely.

Baby i love you.
you know it's true.
i just wish i had a clue,
or a map to say where to.

I'm never gunna look back,
to any time before i heard
Your lovely voice, and saw your lovely face.

I'll never go anywhere before I found out where you were.

© k K., So.Pasadena, CA

The author's comments:
A random writing here. Inspired by the love of my life ; I know it isn't the best, but it's what i felt, and in my eyes that makes it perfect.
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emily12mhs said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:30 pm
This is really cute. Make sure you watch out for grammatical errors. Other than that, good work!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 8:47 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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this is beautiful!! i love it! If you could please comment and rate my work that would be amazing!! thanks and ur so good!!!