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Lunar Eclipse

June 16, 2011
By paigeforeman GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s kind of fun to do the impossible!&quot;-Walt Disney <br /> &quot;It&#039;s not the years in your life that count, it&#039;s the life in your years.&quot;- Abraham Lincoln <br /> &quot;Be the change you wish to see in the world.&quot;-Gandhi<br /> &quot;The truth is out there.&quot;-The X-Files

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Here in this cold night
The world’s lit in moonlight
That’ll soon be gone.
But you know tonight, tonight,
I’m gonna disappear with the moon,
The moon.

Mom, tired of going with the flow
‘Cause Dad made my black and blue continue to grow
But Mom, you felt it too.
Just never thought to argue
Since Dad was the river.

Daddy, want to say goodbye,
But you’d try to stop me with a lie.
Mommy, won’t see you anytime soon
‘Cause I’m gonna disappear with the moon,
The moon.

The moon and me are halfway gone
And red will be all that’s left at dawn.
The devil can save a place for me.
Dad, you always said I belonged in Hell.
So now I hope you’re happy…with me.

Henry, Henry, Henry,
Hide!
Henry, Henry, Henry,
Hide!
No, no, no,
Don’t you Hide!
No, no, no,
Don’t you Hide!
No, no, no, no, no!

Dad,
You think you can stain me in blue and red?
Here’s news for you—I’m already dead!

Gonna disappear with the moon tonight
Tired of wanting to fight.
Mom, sorry to leave you in an eclipse,
But I have to disappear with the moon,
The moon…

Tired of going with the flow…

© Jordan L., Wichita, KS

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Inspired by the Lunar Eclipse. I want to know how you guys interpret this so please comment! If you are confused, I will tell you what certain things mean.
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Queena SILVER said...
on Sep. 7 2012 at 11:06 am
Queena SILVER, East Hanover, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t tell me the sky&#039;s the limit when there are footprints on the moon.&quot;

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Hi! A while ago, you read one of my pieces and asked me to check this out... I know it's really late now but I am SO glad that I did. This piece is AMAZING. You gave me chills. Although this poem is about something tragic, you voiced it perfectly. I am so jealous of your talent! I would happy to read WHATEVER you write. Awesome job!
paigeforeman GOLD said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 7:10 pm
paigeforeman GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
18 articles 6 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s kind of fun to do the impossible!&quot;-Walt Disney <br /> &quot;It&#039;s not the years in your life that count, it&#039;s the life in your years.&quot;- Abraham Lincoln <br /> &quot;Be the change you wish to see in the world.&quot;-Gandhi<br /> &quot;The truth is out there.&quot;-The X-Files

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:-D Thank you, and yes, you're correct about the, "stain me in blue and red part."
paigeforeman GOLD said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 7:09 pm
paigeforeman GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
18 articles 6 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s kind of fun to do the impossible!&quot;-Walt Disney <br /> &quot;It&#039;s not the years in your life that count, it&#039;s the life in your years.&quot;- Abraham Lincoln <br /> &quot;Be the change you wish to see in the world.&quot;-Gandhi<br /> &quot;The truth is out there.&quot;-The X-Files

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:-D Thank you, and yes, you are correct on the, "stain me in blue and red," part.
LovelyMiss GOLD said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 4:50 pm
LovelyMiss GOLD, Floresville, Texas
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This was very well thought out:) I very much enjoyed reading this... When u said stain me in blue and red you were relating this to bruises and blood? Keep writing your very well talented(:
paigeforeman GOLD said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 8:28 pm
paigeforeman GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
18 articles 6 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s kind of fun to do the impossible!&quot;-Walt Disney <br /> &quot;It&#039;s not the years in your life that count, it&#039;s the life in your years.&quot;- Abraham Lincoln <br /> &quot;Be the change you wish to see in the world.&quot;-Gandhi<br /> &quot;The truth is out there.&quot;-The X-Files

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:-) Thank you!
otterbabys.pedersen said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 7:11 pm
i love it!!!!
paigeforeman GOLD said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 6:29 pm
paigeforeman GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
18 articles 6 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s kind of fun to do the impossible!&quot;-Walt Disney <br /> &quot;It&#039;s not the years in your life that count, it&#039;s the life in your years.&quot;- Abraham Lincoln <br /> &quot;Be the change you wish to see in the world.&quot;-Gandhi<br /> &quot;The truth is out there.&quot;-The X-Files

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Thank you! Also, yes, it is about a boy who is abused.
pandaLICIOUS SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 6:19 pm
pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
8 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.&rdquo; -Audrey Hepburn

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Wow. This is nice!! I love the flow of it, and how it's almost like a conversation. I'm guessing this poem is about an abusive relationship? Anways awesome job!
paigeforeman GOLD said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 6:17 pm
paigeforeman GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
18 articles 6 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s kind of fun to do the impossible!&quot;-Walt Disney <br /> &quot;It&#039;s not the years in your life that count, it&#039;s the life in your years.&quot;- Abraham Lincoln <br /> &quot;Be the change you wish to see in the world.&quot;-Gandhi<br /> &quot;The truth is out there.&quot;-The X-Files

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:-) Thanks, and true, I wish I could hear it with instruments. This is one of the times where I want to play guitar...
esnow824 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 5:28 pm
esnow824 BRONZE, Burbank, California
4 articles 4 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Go fall down a hole.&quot;<br /> &quot;No! See, that&#039;s not nice. The nice way to do it is to say &#039;Go take a long walk off a short pier.&quot;<br /> &quot;GO TAKE A REALLLLLYYY LONG WALK OFF OF A TINYYY PIER!&quot;

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Haunting! I want to hear it with instruments!