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An Empty Field Part One

March 16, 2012
By NGGuerrette GOLD, Litchfield, New Hampshire
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NGGuerrette GOLD, Litchfield, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
If the world is one thing, and we are another then we should entitle ourselves into that, because it is the law that resides in our heart to go forth and to examine the rest of us… -Myself

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An empty field
With you
Is like taking a clear sunny sky
And kissing it
Leaving a mark
That will never be erased

An empty field
Is like the frozen lands
Melting away
Into never ending horizon
With sound like the trumpets of heaven
Raining

An empty field
Is my dreams
Dancing in the sunlight
Barefoot with a dress
Torn from words
That I never said

What I feel about you is what happens to this empty field…

© Julia K., Nagykovacsi, Hungary

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This is probably one of my best works...
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_ella_herondale BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2012 at 8:54 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
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&quot;...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, &#039;at last, the wheel comes full circle,&#039; they kept their silence.&quot;

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Wow! Very interesting and simply beautiful. Very nice work... again, a new favorite!