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My Melody
October 10, 2013
You're my melody
Sweet and simple, beautifully you
Strong and soulful, all I'll ever need
A glorious melody
Let's me soar in a world of make believe
From a hard life, a welcome reprieve
Let's me fly away
'Cause you're my melody
On angel wings we coast over trees
Graceful and silent, an ethereal being
Such a joyous feeling
Sends a sweet thrill
So amazing how it makes me feel
'Cause you're my melody
© Amanda L., Albuquerque, NM
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VampiricAngel13 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 18 2013 at 3:27 pm
Thank you! I will take your advice to heart and do better on my next song, thank you for your tips and pointers. I'm also becoming a fan of your works!
Beautiful! I would have liked to see it broken up in stanzas, though. Perhaps after "A glorious melody", and both "'Cause you're my melody". Also since you had such descriptive language throughout the poem, you might want to use "because" instead to keep it consistant. Personally, I like a little bit of rhyming in a poem, but that is my own opinion. But I really liked it! Good job!
