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December 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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If I climbed the highest mountain,
Swam across the widest sea,
Possibly would you then,
Begin to believe in me?

If I found the cure to cancer,
Or created a great invention,
Finally would you have faith,
In all my good intentions?

If I stopped the hungry from starving,
And gave strength to all the weak,
Maybe then would you listen,
To all the words I speak?

If you simply made a difference,
In one life or two,
I promise I would be proud,
Because I already believe in you...

© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico

The author's comments:
Just the frustration of being ignored and put down inspired me to write this poem... why can't people just have faith in others dreams, hopes, and intentions... come on have a lil faith
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HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 2:50 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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ohh :) that was really good, n really sweet in the end.. i really liked this!! beautiful workk
_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:12 am
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle<br /> - Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference<br /> -R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)<br /> -Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

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i loved it, it almost seemed like lyrics when i first read it. And i agree with your poem, yoiu just have to believe someimes. You have a lot of talent. btw-can you check out some of my stuff?
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 9:21 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thank you so much:)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 9:21 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thank you. I will def check out your work n comment on it:)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 9:18 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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thank you! I will totally check out your work!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 9:17 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Aw thank so much...I don't ever plan to stop lol
LastChapter said...
on Jul. 12 2010 at 8:45 pm
LastChapter, Hempstead, New York
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(couldn&#039;t think of anything better at the time) &quot;Take the first step in faith. You don&#039;t have to see the whole staircase, just take the first step.&quot;-Dr.Martin Luther King Jr.

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i loved it! but i especially love how your poems rhyme (although they don't have to in order to be good) without the rhymes seeming forced. Lots of times that happens because people try and stay with a rhyming pattern, but it ends up destroying their piece. keep it up!
Eli15 GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 5:39 am
Eli15 GOLD, Melboune, Other
19 articles 0 photos 6 comments

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Hope is believing in spite of evidence then watching the evidence change

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Hey this is really good, i would love it if you could write some more like this and your others. they mean alot to me. thankyou. Could you now please view my articles. People has seen it but have not commented on it. I need some feedback so i know what im doing is good or bad
haventy0uheard PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2010 at 11:00 pm
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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this is amazing, i loved it! i believe in you as a fantastic writer :D check out my work if you want
BlossomAstro2 said...
on Jun. 25 2010 at 12:53 am
BlossomAstro2, Burien, Washington
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Dont cry beacause its over smile because it happened:)- Dr. Suess

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Your super good at writing don't ever stop.
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 23 2010 at 11:04 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Awe thank you:)
PoemLoverSara PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 8:55 pm
PoemLoverSara PLATINUM, Tampa, Florida
27 articles 0 photos 36 comments

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Love Is Nothing But A Dream&hearts;

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this is really good, you are really talented plz keep writing lol!:] and i have faith in you too!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 11:34 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thank you so much:) 
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 2:10 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

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Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] &hearts;

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This is soooo inspirational ! Your amazing at writing ! I love all your pieces ! Don't ever stop writing , your fantastic !

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u

Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 9:21 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
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&ldquo;I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing&rsquo;s gonna break my stride, &ldquo; &ndash;David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

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You're welcome and thank you!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 11:14 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thank you:) well I believe in you too!
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD said...
on May. 30 2010 at 8:23 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
16 articles 0 photos 620 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing&rsquo;s gonna break my stride, &ldquo; &ndash;David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

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Amazing! I believe in you! Great job! Don't let anyone tell you you can't do anything because you most certainly can! I feel like people don't care about me or can hear me sometimes too. The world isn't always a nice place to be, but always smile!
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD said...
on May. 30 2010 at 8:21 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
16 articles 0 photos 620 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing&rsquo;s gonna break my stride, &ldquo; &ndash;David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

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I agree with you bluemagnet22! People should keep their comments to themselves if they are mean! Great job! Don't let mean comments stop you from writing. Snookums is probably just jealous of you.
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on May. 26 2010 at 11:09 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thank u thank u thank u:):);)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on May. 26 2010 at 11:09 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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I love the idea of a double meaning...that is the beauty of poetry...it can be translated to fit in anyone life...I'm a Christian also n had never thought of it as God speaking to us...thank you for  showing that to me:)