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One Hit; One visit.

February 25, 2010
By Anonymous

Aggravation comes quick to sanity.
In small quality, grand results were sent.
Constant crave; amusement. Repetition,
Lost count, lights off. Time to go, a journey started;
This fox was once friendly, fun to be with.
Mesmerizing, the fox fools with time.
Negative intensions, a thief so sly,
Following the fox stopped being so fun.
The white fox was assisting to invite,
Arriving to an alluring entrance.
Unconditional host,
He welcomed all.
Expecting all lights, this domain. Infinite;
Stepping on the steps were a final action.
An addiction, is the fox, is the host.

© Anonymous

The author's comments:
Its a slow and unnoticed death. Give consideration to the text and its meaning. Be a mature audiance if you are giving consideration to read between the lines. Keep in mind that light is symbolic for life. The fox, is cocaine, and the unconditional host, death.
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on Mar. 9 2010 at 2:46 pm
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx