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March 12, 2010
By Ahadork1225 BRONZE, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Ahadork1225 BRONZE, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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waiting for you is like waiting for rain when we are in a drout

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It's not fair that i have to deal with it
I can not take it being without him
In do time i just want to have a fit
My life without him is so very grim
He means so much to me it's so very crazy
I think about him non stop threw the day
I wish he was fun and not so lazy
I want him to talk to me and just say
All his feelings sould just come stright on out
I am so hurt being with out him too
BUt all i get is a great big loud shout
But i just try to make me look so blue
Some people fall in love very quickly
But some relationships end up sickly

© Mary Claire J., Wichita Falls, TX

The author's comments:
Me giving my all to a boy and letting him live with me, in the end turns out horrable and he just dosnt care. He dosnt care about how i feel dose what ever he wants and treats me like nothing when he is around his friends. When its just me he treats me amazing.
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Ahadork1225 BRONZE said...
on May. 17 2010 at 7:33 am
Ahadork1225 BRONZE, South Plainfield, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
waiting for you is like waiting for rain when we are in a drout

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Thank you very much, i had just posted a new "I Am From" poem. ill be sure to check out some of your writeings!
Milo! said...
on Apr. 4 2010 at 7:49 am

Wow. It’s impossible not to be in love with this. It’s truly amazing. It really captures the emotion you’re trying to convey. Keep writing, because I want to see more. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.