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Savior

April 12, 2010
By CaitlinMarie BRONZE, Norco, Louisiana
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So I went to my happy place today
And I sat down under the blazing sun
In silence I began to pray
In the water my reflections begun

I sit as my thoughts begin to emerge
When your face comes to my mind, My Savior
I feel like I am going to submerge
Until your presence changed my behavior

As Your arms wrap me up in Your embrace
I feel like I can take the world’s crude thoughts
Dark blankets that cover me is replaced
Demons inside me are now being fought

So what am I made of? The cowardness?
I am made from You and your righteousness

© Rebecca Y., Los Angeles, CA

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